I also would like to add that I finally decided on the main plot for the story as well. Which you will also see below after the new finalized drawing for the main cover of the comic.
CONCEPT THREE
At first, I really didn't like how I had made the font (house) in bold and then the other (worlds) thinner. But then I figured, it will be fixed in photoshop later, when I make the final copy of the comic itself. The main character depicted here, is Rachel. Her cousin Taylor, will be shown later, possibly on the other side or in the background. As for the building, I am going to make it a more victorian type house, since I tend to go for the more classic look (when it comes to something that is more of a "thriller")(except this really isn't a thriller, more like a science fiction type with a bit of fantasy mixed in).